SOoooo i tried some of the things jim suggested and i do think it looks better ive thought about a package thats colour scheme changes depending on whats in it like if it was strawberries it would be reds and pinks so ive done this tonight.
The order i done them is from top to bottom so the bottom ones are my most recent.

I've been neglecting my blog again :( but i've been working on the grown your own still i had a tutorial today this is what i showed Jim seemed to really like my logo for it he said i just have to give it a bit more attitude on the package by maybe trying other colours, because the brown its quite gardenery already which i thought too he suggested that i make the grow your own a big bigger on the pack.

Theres a website i found its really good his work is pure inspiring. 

www.neilduerden.co.uk

Advertising Campaign for Grow Your Own possibly

As my last project wasnt very successful not that i expected it to be but ive decided to get my finger out and work hard this time so here are a few first ideas :)

Doctor of Love idea